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Andrew Kaufman’s Bestseller

Wednesday, December 15th, 2010

I had the great honor of working with author Andrew Kaufman on his debut bestselling novel, While The Savage Sleeps, and he has kindly consented to visit here with us a bit.

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My story was really no different from thousands of others.

I had a completed novel and knew that in order to get it published I had to get an agent. This was the way it was done, I’d been told, how it had been for years.

I spent more than a year looking for one, had quite a few requests, but in the end, no offers for representation. Several told me that although they found While the Savage Sleeps compelling, well-written, and solid, they didn’t think they could sell it. The reasons? There were many, but the biggest snag, according to them, was that it mixed two genres which had nothing to do with each other: forensic science and the paranormal. I remember one of them telling me that the idea was “just too unique,” that bookstores wouldn’t know what shelf to put it on. That frustrated me to no end. I mean, since when is having something different a bad thing? What I also began to see was an emerging theme, that the industry professionals didn’t seem to have a grasp on what the public wanted anymore. They’d developed this model of “what will sell” that seemed so rigid it defied logic.

After a slew of rejections (I stopped counting at a hundred), my dreams of finding an agent and becoming a published author appeared to be nothing more than that: a dream.

But I wasn’t willing to give up on my book—not yet, anyway. I believed in it, knew I had something worth reading, and that it would sell if given the chance. The question now was, how to give it that chance. It appeared the publishing gatekeepers held the key, and getting past them was nearly impossible.

But that was about to change.

E-books were a new emerging technology at the time, but from the start I saw enormous potential, knew it would not only change how we read; it would change what we read.

My first clue came at a writers conference in the Bay Area when one of the speakers got my attention. He told the group, “Do you know you can publish your book on Kindle? Right now? That you don’t even need an agent?”

I hadn’t, but the idea intrigued me.

I’d already owned my Kindle, had fallen in love with it for a variety of reasons, but seeing my own work in e-ink? For people to read? On Amazon, no less? The world’s largest bookseller? The possibilities seemed endless, and man, was I ever there.

I loved the roguish quality of it all. I mean, who doesn’t dream of bucking the system, of proving the Powers That Be wrong? But besides that, there was something else that appealed to me, something much more important: it was the idea of putting the decision back where it belonged–not with the New York agents, not with the big publishing houses, but instead in the hands of the people who mattered most. The readers.

In June of 2010, While the Savage Sleeps went live on Amazon Kindle. It was fun. It was exciting. It was … well, sort of a letdown. You see, in my wide-eyed and naïve optimism, I actually believed it would sell through some sort of osmosis process, that by simply “being up there” among all the other big names, people would find it, buy it, read it.

Clearly, I was delusional.

And I found that out rather quickly because for the first month, I saw a total of three sales. One was me, and the other was—bless her heart—Jeannette, my editor. Don’t know who the other was.

So much for bucking the system.

It took me a while to figure out that there was more to this game, that in order to sell a book, one actually has to get off his rear and promote it. So that’s what I did.

I went deep, talked to everyone I could, studied what they were doing. I Googled my little heart out and visited every online discussion group I could find: Kindle forums, paranormal groups, you name it, I was there getting to know people—the cyber-equivalent of shaking hands and kissing babies.

And it paid off in a big way.

One day in July, While the Savage Sleeps took off. At midnight it hit #98 in the top one-hundred. By the next morning it was #76, and through the day it just kept moving. By five p.m it was #4. A few weeks later it went to #1, passing heavy-hitters like Stephen King and Nora Roberts.

I kept wondering when I would wake up and realize it was all just a dream, but that never happened. My book was in fact a bestseller, and I was thrilled.

But more than that, I think it proved a very fundamental point. The e-reader is not only a force to be reckoned with—it’s also a harbinger of change, leveling what was once a very uneven playing field, fixing a system that for years had been broken. With more than one-hundred rejections under my belt I’d proven that. The agents didn’t think While the Savage Sleeps was sellable, but the reading public disagreed, and they spoke loudly and clearly.

And the most exciting thing of all? This is only the beginning. The Indie Movement is building momentum like never before. Authors who had previously fallen through the cracks are being read while others are not only breaking away from their publishers, they’re finding great success doing it.

Is the system perfect? Certainly not. Is poor-quality work being churned out? Absolutely. Is the reading public smart enough to know the difference?

You bet.

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I’m very impressed with Andrew, who didn’t let rejections stand in his way. His publishing model may not be right for everyone, but it does prove that you can do what you set out to do. And then you’ll be … beyond the elements of style!

To Outline, Or Not To Outline (was that the question?)

Tuesday, November 23rd, 2010

I’m often confronted, either in my own writing workshop or in others that I lead, about outlining. Should one outline? Does it keep an author or track, or stifle creativity?

A colleague once told me this:

“It’s probably worth mentioning that P.G. Wodehouse was a champion outliner. In fact, his outlining process was more like pre-writing the book, since he went into a great deal of detail at that stage and ended up with something nearly book-length from which to do his rewrite. All on the typewriter, of course, which was probably an asset since he was looking at familiar hard copy while doing the actual refining.

“The problem I see fairly often with authors who use outlining on the computer is the technical ease of drag-and-drop editing or writing in new bits which seem to fit the outline heading but add nothing (or even subtract) from the logical flow of the text. Authors who succumb to the temptation don’t always understand why it’s wise to prune out the excrescences or at least sort out the logic of the transitions from one bit to another within the section.”

Do I, personally, outline? Not really. I like to know where I’m starting and where I’m going, but as I tend to write about a central question, issue, or situation that interests me, most of the surrounding work derives from that. So for fiction, I write out character biographies and descriptions of settings as they occur to me. For nonfiction, it’s more of a topic list that I shuffle around based on what I think of as I write. (My fiction, with the exception of my mystery novels, is character-centered, so my tendency is to sit back and let the characters show me where the story should be going!)

But many writers (see Wodehouse, above) find outlining very helpful and stick to it religiously.

There’s a third outlining area — writing the outline after the fact. This can happen because the author needs the proverbial “outline and three sample chapters” for a submission … or because something’s gone wrong in the writing process and the author needs a detailed guide to rewrite it into what will make sense to the reader. I’ve been in both camps — not because something has gone wrong per se, but because something has changed and the outline needs to reflect that change. In my current work in progress, I decided halfway through to make the protagonist’s younger brother into an older brother; not only do I have to go back and fix the earlier chapters, but I also have to remember to change the outline to reflect it.

In any case, to outline or not to outline is a question that only you can answer. You need to write in the way you feel called to write, and make the writing conventions work for you, not the other way around. And then you’ll be … beyond the elements of style!

Perseverance is Everything

Thursday, November 4th, 2010

Last week, guest blogger Ann Hite told the story of her own journey from rejection to publication, and it’s clear that she hit a nerve with a lot of people. I’m here today to say that her story is the norm, not the exception.

A colleague of mine talks wistfully about an acquaintance who got laid off from a newspaper reporting job and sat in Starbucks for a couple of months, baby on her knee, thus producing a novel that sold instantly and well. Stories like this one are dangerous, because they make us believe that it’s a real possibility.

Yeah, well, there are a lot of other real possibilities in the world, too. The earth could be hit by flying space debris. You could win the lottery. Your uncle Ernie could die and leave you a fortune. Your best friend could be hospitalized. The point is, we don’t move forward through life acting as though any of these possibilities will really take place. We may hope for some of them, but we don’t behave as though they’re a fait accompli.

The reality is that for most writers, rejection is part of daily life. And anyone who cringes at those words should right now, immediately, look into some other more profitable way of spending their time. Because otherwise they’re in for a great deal of nearly intolerable frustration.

Write because you love it; write because you cannot not write.

That doesn’t mean that you shouldn’t try to get published. It just means that the road is hard. And not just for you … go out, right now, and pick up a marvelous little book called Rotten Rejections, reviewed here as Even Proust Got Rejected — you’ll realize that you’re in really good company!

Next Saturday at the New England Crimebake conference I’ll be given an award for a short story I submitted to the Al Blanchard Memorial Prize. I’m pleased, of course. But here’s the whole story: Al Blanchard was a friend and colleague of mine. I was present when he died, and when the prize in his memory was announced, I wrote this story specifically for it. It got rejected. Okay, fine. I sent the story out to more journals and magazines than I can count, literally for years, and it always came back .. rejected. This year I thought, why not, and sent it again to the judging committee for the very same prize for which it had been rejected before … and it became a runner-up. If that’s not a tale of perseverence, I don’t know what is!

So there you have it. Write and write and write … and send stuff out, all the time, every week. When something is rejected, send it out again. Eventually it’s perseverance that pays off. And then you’ll be … beyond the elements of style!