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Archive for October, 2006

Ideas for Backgrounds

Monday, October 30th, 2006

When Arlo Guthrie was asked where he gets his song ideas, he said he pulls them out of a creek that runs through his property. He added, “I’m just glad I don’t live downstream from Bob Dylan!”

Where do you find your story ideas?

If you’re having problems coming up with fresh ideas, one of the best things you can consider is giving yourself a change of scenery. Whether it’s visiting an exotic section of your city, a drive in the country, a weekend in the mountains or a holiday at the seashore, any change is likely to tickle your brain in creative ways.

One of my favorite activities – one that I don’t indulge nearly often enough – is playing the Destination-Nowhere game. Open a map (real, not virtual), close your eyes, and put your finger down somewhere on the map. That place is your destination, and is to be treated with the same seriousness (or lack thereof) that you’d treat a planned trip to a vacation destination: it’s a field trip! Take off and notice everything that you can along the way – the countryside, the way people talk and dress, the architecture of the buildings. Eat at a local dive rather than a fast-food joint. Imagine the stories that can grow out of this place you’d probably never have thought to go otherwise!

Wherever you go, collect stuff. Take pictures of everything. Fill an envelope with brochures. Bring a notebook, jot down your impressions, and don’t worry about how you’re expressing them: just write.

When you do go to write about the place, you’ll have instant access to the impressions you formed during your trip. Take a lot of Destination-Nowhere trips, and you’ll never want for story ideas and backgrounds… and then you’ll truly be beyond the elements of style!

Correct Grammar: Back in Style?

Tuesday, October 24th, 2006

“Clauses and Commas Make a Comeback: SAT Helps Return Grammar to Class”

Yesterday’s Washington Post (http://tinyurl.com/y62s8j) carried an article about grammar coming back into style. The teacher profiled isn’t unique (and thank goodness for that – perhaps a new trend is starting!); and the article itself is full of generalizations and oversimplifications; but it’s a trend worth noting and applauding. Anything emphasizing the value of learning correct grammar, usage, and so on can only be… beyond the elements of style!

ARGH!

Saturday, October 14th, 2006

I’ve been spending a fair amount of time putting together a proposal for a feminist press that had put out an RFP for a project they’re working on called Girls and Science, to try and get girls more interested in the area.

I was excited, because I’ve long noted the absence of women (and of people of color, for that matter) in software engineering. When my stepdaughter Anastasia was around eight, I wrote a book for her about Ada Lovelace, arguably first computer programmer, certainly first technical writer; and later I enlarged it with a glossary and anecdotal sidebars and activities, and tried to sell it, but to no avail. So I made it the cornerstone of my proposal, outlining a series of five such books highlighting women in computing, with the same collateral material. I did research to indicate how and why good role models can help change one’s way of thinking about something. I put together all the studies about women and computing, how from a very young age girls are excluded from the boys’ clubhouse (girls use computers to *do* things — word processing, music, accessing sites like MySpace; but they’re not terribly interested in *how* they work). All that. Sent the proposal in.

Answer came back almost immediately: we’re not interested in proposals for elementary-aged children, we want high school and college level proposals.

Can I COUNT how many things are wrong with that?

First off, nowhere in the RFP was any age group mentioned. Secondly, if you really want to change the world you need to start with younger children. But, um, this is a feminist press, and they refer to high school and college-aged females as *girls*?

You’ve come a long way, baby.

Guess I’ll keep shopping my proposal elsewhere. It’s the perseverance that pays… and keeps me beyond the elements of style!

Jeannette Cézanne
Customline Wordware, Inc.